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THE LEADER
20-03-08, 03:20 PM
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته..

مـــســـاء الــخيــر لــكــل الأعـــضـــاء الــمــتــواجــدن وأخص بالذكر أخواني المشرفين..



In the name of allah

Beganing I say good evening to all memebers especially supervisors

I want to help me because I a new member

I study in University of Qassem(department English) level two

yesterday our doctor need homework necessary and he say if any body no give me intime I won't get any marks

he sayed I want :followings




w1-write any story to be simple


w2-you should have write 15 sentences atleast


w3-write a topic & Controlling idea




_________________________

Example ..


This paraghraph will be about:Why he is a great soccer player.maybe he has a lot of stamina.He might be a good at passing the ball.Or he might be a very effective team player

THE END

Topic Sentence:I have an older brother


Controlling idea:is a great soccer player

_________________________

I thinking that clear ..I want story like these steps







best wishes
Thamer

الحنان البريء
20-03-08, 04:45 PM
استاذي الفاضل THE LEADER

In the begining I'm sorry for not giving you any kind of help

DON'T BE surprised !!!...


FIRSTLY : Because Ididn't get you

SECONDLY :I found alot of mistakes in your English writing

THIRDLY....

you'r in your second year in the unversity " English department " that means you'r especialized in English

If I help you'll never ever learn correct English , you'll

never learn from your mistakes

In addition , I'll encourage you to depend on others to solve your H.W , that is "
" HOMEWORK"

ESPACIALLY YOU'R ESPACIALISED IN ENGLIH INDEED

!!!!!!!!AND IN YOUR SECOND YEAR

" WHEN YOU'LL KNOW HOW TO WRITE ENGLISH CORRECTLY AND WRITE YOUR HOME WORK BY YOUR OWN

؟؟؟؟؟


This is my openion & this my advice

you can accept it or reject it

BEST REGBARDS TO YOU

THE LEADER
20-03-08, 08:11 PM
استاذي الفاضل THE LEADER



I lifted the hat up proud to you(q81)

In the begining I'm sorry for not giving you any kind of help

DON'T BE surprised !!!...


FIRSTLY : Because Ididn't get you

SECONDLY :I found alot of mistakes in your English writing

that is normally because I foundision student Don,t forget

THIRDLY....

you'r in your second year in the unversity " English department " that means you'r especialized in English

first: not second that,s first year
second: I know that but all student complain from "TA" or doctors because all of them are bad ..majority ununderstand all of things

If I help you'll never ever learn correct English , you'll

never learn from your mistakes

that,s right

In addition , I'll encourage you to depend on others to solve your H.W , that is "
" HOMEWORK"

ESPACIALLY YOU'R ESPACIALISED IN ENGLIH INDEED

!!!!!!!!AND IN YOUR SECOND YEAR

" WHEN YOU'LL KNOW HOW TO WRITE ENGLISH CORRECTLY AND WRITE YOUR HOME WORK BY YOUR OWN

؟؟؟؟؟

what is your opinion about book has rich in stories & information?
Arabic English translated

This is my openion & this my advice

openion is mistake ..Opinion is correct(q81)

you can accept it or reject it

Ofcourse I accept you

BEST REGBARDS TO YOU



thank you very much on your opinion & advice

Best wishes
Thamer

baadysaad
20-03-08, 08:32 PM
Well done Al - Hannan
and
good luck to you Thamer

THE LEADER
20-03-08, 09:01 PM
Thanks a lot on your pass

my dear baadysaad

اوراق المساء
22-03-08, 09:19 PM
Should Be Done By Your Self
Thanks

الحنان البريء
22-03-08, 09:19 PM
Well done Al - Hannan

and

good luck to you Thamer



(qq115) Thanks BADDY

الحنان البريء
22-03-08, 09:21 PM
MY PLEASURE " THE LEADER "...

زهرة حياتي
31-03-08, 03:38 PM
Hello, dear memebers,
Dear Leader, I am willing to provide you with much help about your english studies: grammar,writing.... , but not to do the homework in your place, I mean that I can provide you with practical tools, .and you need to develop them youself

سمي الظبي
27-08-09, 07:57 AM
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